March 30th, 2011 
Admin ObjectivePresently seeking an administrative assistant position where I can work with a creative team of individuals, where promotional opportunities are achievable.
Experience 1998–Present U.S. Security Associates New York, NY
Supervisor ( Young & Rubicam Brands)
•Answer phones, faxes and emails.
•Assist customers / clients with incoming questions
•Monthly reports and theft reports.
•Schedule and payroll.
1996–1998 162nd Dental Office New York, NY
Receptionist
•Responsible for updating calendar and scheduling appointments.
•Filing and creating records for new patients
•Assisting patients with incoming questions.
•Follow-up calls, after patients visit.
•Answer the phones and fax.
•Verify insurance coverage / co pay.
1994–1996 Ronald Gerard Delphin, M.D. New York, NY
Receptionist
•Filing and creating records for new patients
•Answer the phones and fax.
•Verify insurance coverage.
Education 2002-2006 Bronx Community College Bronx, NY
A.A., Liberal Arts / Early Childhood Development.
2006-Present Lehman College Bronx, NY
B.A., Major: History and a Minor: Early Childhood Education
Certificates / SKILLS
•CPR/AED, First Aid and Fire guard certificate
•Lotus Notes
•Microsoft Word, Microsoft Outlook, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel,
•Customer service skills
•Proactive and detailed oriented
•Bilingual English / Spanish.
*furnish reference up on request.
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In the objective: "where promotional opportunities are available" not are achievable – or just ", with opportunity for advancement" which is probably better
Under experience: just questions, not incoming questions – what other kind are there?
On your BA – the way you state it, is ambiguous as to whether you’ve completed it. Since you say "-present", I’m assuming you haven’t, so I’d say something like "working toward BA…" or "completion expected xxxxxxx".
I wouldn’t put SKILLS all in caps unless I put "certificates", experience, and education all in caps also – either way is OK but be consistent.
last line – no space in the middle of upon – and might say "References available…: rather than "*furnish reference…"
Other than those few minor things, looks pretty good.
Good luck.